Myers Fiction Review: Dragon Day by Bob Proehl

Dragon Day gets a new definition in literature thanks to Bob Proehl, brought forward with less magic and more realism. The story's goal is understanding initial human-dragon interactions so the world may survive. Set in our modern world, it shows how human problems impact challenges when new forces enter our reality.

Subplots: Adding Depth to Your Main Story

Subplots influence the reader's experience like spices in a meal. A story can still be enjoyable without them, but something essential will be missing. Without the Dursleys, Draco Malfoy, or the rich world-building subplots, Harry Potter might have been just another story about a wizarding school.

Foreshadowing and Payoff: Planting Seeds for Future Plot Points

Great foreshadowing feels inevitable in hindsight but surprising in the moment. Like noticing Uncle Greg's affair before everyone else—the clues were always there. From explicit prophecies to subtle behavioral tells, mastering this craft means trusting your readers' intelligence while keeping them guessing. The best stories make you say "I knew it!"

Plot Twists: Surprising Your Readers (Without Losing Them)

Plot twists can make or break your story. While great ones trigger dopamine and create memorable experiences, poor twists betray reader trust and undermine emotional investment. Learn the psychology behind effective twists, explore character-based and situational techniques, and discover how to avoid common pitfalls that turn five-star stories into disappointing failures.

Myers Fiction June Newsletter

Gone are the days of drowning readers in encyclopedic world-building. The modern approach is surgical—delivering exactly what readers need, exactly when they need it. Think of world-building like a skilled surgeon, not a fire hose of information. Your goal isn't to overwhelm, but to illuminate.