- Introduction
- The Psychology Behind Effective Plot Twists
- Types of Plot Twists and When to Use Them
- Common Pitfalls and How to Avoid Them
- Writing Exercise: The Twist Reversal Challenge
- Conclusion
- Additional Resources
Introduction
Plot twists are a unique story element that receives conflicting responses from the reader base. There may seem to be no clear answer on if you should use plot twists or not. One plot twist that always comes to mind is that of Shutter Island by Dennis Lehane. Readers are shocked but also still question which side is the truth, a great way to end a thriller novel. We’ll break down this plot twist more later. While great plot twists are memorable, the bad ones are just as, or more, memorable.
The bad ones aren’t just poorly executed, but psychologically effect a reader’s experience with the story. So let’s make sure we build the best plot twists through study of the types, how to craft them organically, and common pitfalls to avoid.
WARNING: As we discuss plot twists, we’ll be using examples from books you may not have read yet. So if you see a story that you still want to experience, then close your eyes on that section.
The Psychology Behind Effective Plot Twists
Our brains are wired to seek patterns and predict outcomes. But we also love surprises, especially in controlled environments like stories. Fiction allows us to experience the thrill of the unexpected without real-world consequences, engaging the brain’s reward system. A strong plot twist triggers a dopamine release, making the experience pleasurable and memorable. The most effective twists balance shock and inevitability, delivering both surprise and a sense of “I should have seen that coming.”
![Gone girl [Book]](https://myersfiction.com/wp-content/uploads/2025/05/713e4yk6brl.jpg)
Take Gone Girl by Gillian Flynn. The twist: Amy fakes her own disappearance to frame her husband, transforming the story into a psychological chess match. When rereading the book, every interaction takes on new meaning, reframing how we perceive Amy’s character. This twist doesn’t just alter the story, it redefines how readers engage with it, making it endlessly compelling.
So, if that’s a great plot twist, what makes a poor one?
A poor plot twist is merely a surprise that fails to deepen the story. Either it doesn’t affect the reader’s experience, or it actively undermines their emotional investment. Readers pour time and emotion into a story, and an unearned twist can make them feel cheated.
Look at The Twilight Saga: Breaking Dawn – Part 2. The epic battle turns out to be just a vision, making the entire sequence meaningless. This issue is common when pivotal confrontations happen in dreams, without genuine danger or real stakes, the twist lacks impact. The audience should feel like the twist reshapes thematic depth, not just delivers a fleeting shock.
Whether strong or weak, plot twists shape the reading experience and the way audiences remember a story. The best twists challenge assumptions, compel analysis, and enhance the themes at the heart of the narrative. Let’s explore how to craft twists that truly resonate.
Types of Plot Twists and When to Use Them
Now that we’ve established a basic understanding of plot twists, let’s look at the different ways to build your own plot twists.
Character-Based Twists
Character-based plot twists include moments where secret identities are revealed, unexpected betrayals, or hidden motivations. These twists challenge a belief held by the characters or readers, flipping it at a pivotal moment.

A secret identity reveal might turn a long-time villain into a hero in the reader’s eyes or expose the true antagonist lurking in the shadows. Take Harry Potter by J. K. Rowling, Severus Snape, often seen as an antagonist, is ultimately revealed as one of Harry’s greatest protectors. This twist reshapes the reader’s perception of Snape, making his sacrifices and ultimate fate hit even harder upon reflection.
Unexpected betrayals often stem from greed, ambition, or survival overpowering loyalty. They devastate readers because they shatter the trust invested in a character. One of the most infamous betrayals is the Red Wedding in A Storm of Swords by George R. R. Martin. The Freys and Boltons turn on the Starks during what should have been a moment of peace, wiping out key figures and shifting the trajectory of the story entirely. This moment is brutal, not just because of the immediate losses, but because it alters all future events. It’s also a prime example of the hidden motivation twist, as the Freys’ true intentions were concealed until the crucial moment.
The hidden motivation twist occurs when a character’s true reason for their actions is suddenly revealed. This often intertwines with betrayals or secret identities, creating layers of deception. Some characters present themselves as mentors, but they subtly align the protagonist’s choices with their own agenda. For example, His Dark Materials by Philip Pullman introduces Mrs. Coulter as a mentor to Lyra, only for the reader to discover that she is secretly manipulating Lyra to serve the Magisterium’s interests.
Situational Twists
The situational twist is all about defying your reader’s expectations of reality, turning everything they thought they knew on its head. A common approach involves revealing that the events were a simulation, dream, or vision. When done well, it leaves readers questioning what’s real and debating which side of the story holds the truth.

Take Inception, for example. As DiCaprio’s character spins his “reality top,” the movie cuts out before we can see if it truly falls, leaving us suspended in uncertainty. Or consider Alice in Wonderland, where all the wild events seem like an insane dream.
Executed effectively, this twist makes your book unforgettable. But it’s a delicate balance; if mishandled, it can frustrate rather than intrigue. The key is ensuring that, even in ambiguity, there’s enough substance for readers to feel satisfied, even if they never get a concrete answer.
Perspective Shifts
Multi-POV stories have a lot of strengths, and one of the most compelling is their ability to reshape the reader’s understanding of events by filtering them through different characters. A well-executed perspective shift can completely alter how a moment is perceived, setting up an unforgettable twist.
One powerful approach is to delay revealing one character’s POV on a pivotal event until the moment of the twist. As long as there’s a logical reason for withholding that perspective, and you respect your readers by making it clear why the information wasn’t presented earlier, they’ll stay engaged rather than frustrated. But if it’s something that naturally would’ve come up before, don’t withhold it just for shock value—it has to feel organic.

This technique shines in books like Gone Girl by Gillian Flynn, where shifting perspectives gradually unravel the true nature of the characters, leading to an unsettling realization about the manipulation at play. Another great example is Atonement by Ian McEwan, where the final twist completely reframes the story through the revelation of withheld information, hitting the reader with an emotional gut punch.
Beyond that, a shifting perspective twist can reveal the antagonist’s side, unveiling a shocking truth and the looming danger ahead. Game of Thrones does this brilliantly, where switching to the antagonist’s perspective lets readers experience their motivations firsthand, sometimes making them more sympathetic—or even terrifying in a new light.
Executed well, this type of twist doesn’t just surprise your readers, it makes them rethink everything they thought they understood about the story.
Common Pitfalls and How to Avoid Them
As talked about before, twists are a sensitive area for many readers as they’ve been done wrong by them often enough. The goal of adding a twist is to surprise the reader while adding value of the story. To ensure that you’re adding the right kinds of twists, and in the right way, let’s look at a few of the common pitfalls of plot twists.
- Manipulative or Pure Shock Value: These twists focus on forcibly withholding, changing, or subverting information just to shock the reader. While an unreliable narrator may not tell the whole truth, their lies should leave breadcrumbs to the truth later revealed. Often described as unearned, the manipulative and pure shock value twists can betray established character profiles, undermine emotional investment, and break the story’s internal logic.
- To avoid this pitfall:
- Foreshadow Subtly: Leave the clues early on, throughout different scenes that hint to the twist. Ask yourself, what small changes in the story/character would need to be in place for this twist to make sense? If it’s not there, and you’d need to force the details in, then you might not need a big twist.
- Keep your characters true to who they are: If your character has an established trait, don’t deviate from it for one scene just to add shock value.
- Respect the audience: Recognize that they will want to understand why this twist happened, how it happened, and what made it necessary.
- Test the twist: Find someone who is willing to let you bounce your ideas off of. Sometimes working in a vacuum kills a story.
- To avoid this pitfall:
- Invalidating Reader’s Emotional Investment: One of the most frustrating experiences for readers is investing hours into a story, only to discover in the final chapters that everything they believed about the plot or characters was essentially a lie. This kind of twist can feel like a betrayal, turning what might have been a four- or five-star experience into a one- or two-star disappointment. Readers enter a story with a sense of trust, that the author will guide them through a meaningful journey and deliver some form of emotional or thematic payoff. When a twist undermines that trust without proper setup or justification, it doesn’t just surprise the reader, it alienates them.
- To avoid this pitfall:
- Follow guidance for Foreshadow Subtly, Keep your characters true, Respect the audience, and Test the Twist.
- Avoid “It was all a Dream” Tropes: This is one of the ultimate thefts of emotional investment. It basically tells the reader there was no reason to stress, worry, or be excited for the outcome, because in the end it had no true effect on the character.
- Deliver Emotional Payoff: Many readers read for catharsis, that magical feeling that gives us a comfort of having lived and learned through experiences. The great thing about fiction is that it allows us to explore situations, worlds, and events that we otherwise wouldn’t have been able to. Delivering the emotional payoff tells the reader you cared about their journey and hope they enjoyed as much as you did.
- To avoid this pitfall:
- Overusing Twists: Twists are a powerful storytelling tool, but like any tool, they lose impact when overused. If every chapter ends with a shocking reveal, readers may start anticipating the twist rather than engaging with the story itself. This can lead to twist fatigue, where the emotional weight of each surprise diminishes over time. Think of it like a TV series: the major twist usually comes at the end of the season, while individual episodes build tension with smaller cliffhangers. Use twists strategically to enhance your narrative, not overwhelm it.
- To avoid this pitfall:
- Prioritize Story and Character First: Before adding a twist, ask if this serves your character or story arc. These should be natural and not put in there because it will make a scene/chapter more exciting.
- Use the Twist to Deepen, Not Distract: A good twist should reframe what the reader knows, and not just surprise them. What does the twist mean to your story, your character, and your reader?
- Study Stories that Use Twists Well: Studying the greats can offer you more than basic answers to well-crafted twists. Look to authors like Gillian Flynn, Agatha Christie, or Jordan Peele for experts in this field.
- To avoid this pitfall:
Writing Exercise: The Twist Reversal Challenge
Practice crafting organic plot twists by working backwards from revelation to setup.
Instructions:
- Choose a simple scenario with two characters (e.g., friends meeting for coffee, siblings arguing, strangers in an elevator). Write 2-3 sentences describing the scene as it appears on the surface.
- Now imagine a twist that completely reframes this interaction. Examples:
- The “stranger” is actually their estranged parent
- The “argument” is rehearsed to fool someone listening
- The “coffee meeting” is actually a witness protection handoff
- Rewrite your original scene, but this time plant 3-5 subtle clues that hint at your twist without giving it away. Focus on:
- Unusual word choices or reactions
- Objects that seem insignificant but aren’t
- Body language that doesn’t quite match the dialogue
- Details that could be interpreted two ways
- Read both versions. Circle the clues that work best, ones that feel natural in the first reading but obvious in hindsight.
Bonus Challenge: Share your scene with someone and see if they can spot the clues before you reveal the twist!
Conclusion
Mastering plot twists isn’t about shocking your readers, it’s about respecting their intelligence while delivering emotionally satisfying surprises that deepen your story’s meaning. The best twists feel both inevitable and unexpected, leaving readers eager to revisit your work with fresh eyes. Remember to foreshadow subtly, stay true to your characters, and always prioritize story over spectacle.
Whether you’re crafting a character’s hidden motivation or orchestrating a reality-shifting revelation, your twist should enhance the reader’s journey, not betray their trust. Ready to transform your storytelling? Practice the techniques we’ve explored, study the masters who execute twists flawlessly, and start planting those breadcrumbs that will lead your readers to unforgettable revelations.
Additional Resources
Books
- “Mastering Suspense, Structure, and Plot” by Jane Cleland
- Especially useful for mystery and thriller writers, this book offers practical tools for building suspense and delivering twists that land.
- “The Writer’s Guide to Plot Twists” by C.S. Lakin
- A focused guide that breaks down different types of plot twists and how to integrate them effectively into your story.
- “Writing the Breakout Novel” by Donald Maass
- While not solely about plot twists, this book is a staple for authors looking to elevate their storytelling. It includes strategies for creating tension, stakes, and surprises that lead to powerful twists.
Online Resources
- Writing Plot Twists: Really Useful Links by Lucy O’Callaghan –
- A list of multiple useful links for you to master your twists.
- 5 Tips for Writing a Killer Plot Twist: Types, Examples, and Techniques – 2025 – MasterClass
- Learn how effective plot twists involve unexpected changes that subvert expectations and keep audiences engaged.
- How to Write a Plot Twist (Video)
Previous Post: June Newsletter
Previous Writing Post: Pacing: Controlling the Speed of Your Story
Next Post: Foreshadowing and Payoff: Planting Seeds for Future Plot Points
Discover more from Kenneth W. Myers
Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.
